Category: Writers Block
Shattered mirror on the wall, tell me what made me fall.
I tried my best, with all my might.
But I'm at my wit's end tonight.
The life I had was so complete,
Then he left and now I weep.
Rivers of tears run from my eyes, after he murmured his unemotional goodbyes.
Since the slam of the door I've not been myself anymore.
I hide in the dark, kneeling on the floor.
Trying to gather the pieces of life that I had before.
The princess with her shiny crown loses all when she falls down.
Further and further from where she began, the princess reaches out her hand.
Someone, anyone catch me please
Help me from failing miserably.
I've held on for so long and now it's the end.
The princess will awake never again.
They will find her in twisted sheets all stained with deadly deeds.
Shattered mirror, broken dreams.
She is now in a deep sleep.
if that is a first that is a good start
good job, I liiked it SS. you have some good skills
Very powerful and arresting imagery I love it!
Hey Fluffy. I'd hardly call that "not very good". I've oft before said that poems written from raw emotion are some of the best, because they provide a glimpse into the soul of the author, rather than just a grammatical artwork. This was a touching poem, and I wish I could change the rhyme to make the poem have a happy ending.